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SVF Reborn Again (First Draft)

By Cyle Brooks

Has SVF finally met his match?

Draft #2
Peer Rating: 27%
Industry Rating: N/A
Draft 2: 27%
2 Reviews | 90 pages | 1 month ago | Draft 2


After trying to figure out what to do next with no more baddies to deal with, SVF and Veronica decide to elope. However, once they thought things were starting to look up, their vacation is interrupted by Victor and Ice Reaper. Although, things take a turn when another new menace is threatening the city, and he may be more than a match for SVF.

Contains extended sequences of strong brutal bloody violence and gore throughout, pervasive language, crude sexual content and nudity, and drug use.

Industry Reviews

Peer Reviews

While assuming this screenplay is a sequel, the screenplay jumps in en media res picking up where the presumed previous entry ended. Unfortunately, this leaves the reader a bit lost, as the action lines discuss previous information unknown to the reader. One key example is that the protagonist, SVF, isn't introduced in an industry standard format, leaving the reader unsure what he looks like. Because of this set up, the reader never really ge...

1 month ago |
Chris Lutzow Top Reviewer
Hello Cyle Brooks, nice to read you!
First of all, considering that you probably already saw the scores I gave “SVF Reborn Again” and read the verdict, I would like to address the reason why I’m being so hard. Surface level there’s little wrong with your script, you can read the script notes for specific issues I found; but the problem is that surface level is the only level at which this script can be reviewed. There is basically no depth to it...

3 weeks ago |

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