BLOOD MOON television
#Sci-Fi/Fantasy
When a vampire is ambushed and wakes up to find his father killed and brother taken captive by werewolves he sets out to save his brother and stop the wolves from bringing back the dark ages.
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14 pages |
2 years ago
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Draft 1
Demarco is a vampire trying to save humanity from the destruction the war between the wolves will create. The wolves want revenge on the vampires and will stop at nothing to get it. Demarco's uncle Belesies wants the vampire race to rule with darkness like before when Drago's ruled. Who will prevail?
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Its a messed up script. The writing is immature. Screenplay format has gone horribly wrong. Can't figure it out what's going on, who are these characters. Doesn't describe them the first time we meet. Doesn't describe the setting. It needs lot of re-writing, reading other screenplay formats.
What is the theme? Themes are very important for shorts. And they needs to be put out as soon as possible.
The dialogues are really bad and long. Boring. U...
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