Earth's Doorstep feature
#Sci-Fi/Fantasy
By
mike
harper
A husband and wife fight to reunite after their starship crashes. That maybe the least of humanity's trouble.
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97 pages |
6 years ago
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Draft 2
Dadau just became the commander of an interstellar ship when his first task is to crashland on Earth, stop an active coup onboard, and find out who released a pathogen on the crew. Too bad he lands into government hands. Now it's up to his wife, Agñasiña to save him, return to the ship, and stop the traitor all before an old enemy returns to destroy everyone. Inspired by the 80's cartoon space opera Robotech.
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There were some great parts in this script, but it was very difficult to read and follow. The world building was amazing, but it was often difficult to follow everything that was happening. It was different than a lot of Sci-Fi/Fantasty that is out there or has already been done. Continue with that as that is your strongest aspect of your writing, imagination, and visuals.
Many of your scenes are complex and fast-paced. Complexity is a trait t...
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