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Genre: Drama,Family,Mystery/Suspense

A family of three goes to the beach for a day. As day progresses, we watch the family gradually grow older, forcing the Mother to come to grips with reality of time...

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Teri Harwood 1 year ago

completed a review for

KNEES SPRING ETERNAL short

Genre: Comedy

Rating: 67%

Entertaining story. Some of the action scenes, especially the big fight at the end were hard to follow. There's a lot of unusual things happening. Tighten that by making it more clear who's involved, especially for the aliens. The aftermath of having a knee eaten (before the stem cell injection) isn't consistent with the description of what is ripped out. The knee wouldn't function at all. Even if the skin healed up, the knee would be quite empty. This needs clarity.

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Teri Harwood 1 year ago

just claimed a review for a script.

KNEES SPRING ETERNAL short

Genre: Comedy

When the food supply of knee munching space aliens becomes scarce because seniors are receiving modern treatments, a frail jokester granny must defeat the hungry chompers with her new physics defying superpowered knees before the aliens gorge on kids to survive.

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Teri Harwood 1 year ago

completed a review for

Dear Clementine, (Draft 2) short

Genre: Drama,Romance,Comedy

Rating: 60%

The concept is nice, especially the ending of the letter. This would make a good short film. Wonderful to see that type of message of appreciation for a past relationship. The execution of the screenplay needs a lot of improvement. The flow and pacing as is would make this film hard to watch. It starts out too long just observing someone writing. The ending scenes as written are jumpy and would be hard to absorb and follow. The style of part animation and part flashback hazy memory may feel inconsistent.

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Teri Harwood 1 year ago

just claimed a review for a script.

Dear Clementine, (Draft 2) short

Genre: Drama,Romance,Comedy

(posting the second draft here because the "add new draft" button keeps giving a server error.)

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Teri Harwood 1 year ago

just joined ScriptMother!

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Beach Day by Marlon Schwiersch

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Teri Harwood 1 year ago

Beach Day short

Teri Harwood 1 year ago

Beach Day short

Teri Harwood 1 year ago

KNEES SPRING ETERNAL short

Teri Harwood 1 year ago

KNEES SPRING ETERNAL short

Teri Harwood 1 year ago

Dear Clementine, (Draft 2) short

Teri Harwood 1 year ago

Dear Clementine, (Draft 2) short

Teri Harwood 1 year ago