Stuart Haag

Stuart H.

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IN PLAIN SIGHT Draft #1

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A Private Investigator-turned-CIA asset must take the reins on an investigation when the agent in charge becomes an amnesiac so that they can free the agent's captive daughter and stop a worldwide banking catastrophe that could lead to WWIII
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Stuart Haag 2 years ago

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Vox Populi feature
Genre: Action/Adventure,Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Thriller
In a cyberpunk post-Brexit Britain, a jaded corporate enforcer and a freedom fighter with a vision become embroiled in a clandestine conspiracy involving a pair of warring factions competing for control of the former United Kingdom, and with it, the world.
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Stuart Haag 2 years ago

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TROOP ETERNITY feature
Genre: Horror,War
When Russia attacks Ukraine in 2022, a patriotic vampire joins the United States military to destroy the Russian Army and stop newly minted vampire Vladimir from annihilating the world with nuclear weapons.
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Stuart Haag 2 years ago

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Finding television
Genre: Drama
A man begins to have visions when a old friend of his dies.
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Stuart Haag 2 years ago

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Apart - An Experimental Short short
Genre: Drama
When the Protagonist's girlfriend breaks up with him, he deals with it by powering through five intense stages of grief...
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Stuart Haag 2 years ago

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IN PLAIN SIGHT feature
Genre: Action/Adventure,Comedy
A Private Investigator-turned-CIA asset must take the reins on an investigation when the agent in charge becomes an amnesiac so that they can free the agent's captive daughter and stop a worldwide banking catastrophe that could lead to WWIII
StuartHaag
Stuart Haag 2 years ago

just claimed a review for a script.

Mary in the White Room feature
Genre: Action/Adventure,Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Thriller
The first conscious humanoid robot flees its creator’s illegal lab, evading the relentless pursuit of darkly competing Government and Corporate forces and a powerful Artificial Intelligence control system, discovering its personhood and inspiring the world to a brighter future for all.
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Stuart Haag 2 years ago

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The couple Ep 1: Party short
Genre: Drama,Comedy
Rating: 47%
So, I read parts 1 and 2, but this seems fully disconnected from them, (and they from each other), so I'm not sure who "The Couple" is... The couples in all of your 10-page shorts don't end up together, and the overarching alien religious theme (barely hinted at in this one - as if only to establish that they take place in the same world) doesn't do anything to connect these thematically or serve a purpose except to establish that the world is not our world (or at least not yet... The aliens may yet arrive). I don't know where you're building to, or toward what... I feel like there needs to be more substance that distinguishes this from ordinary life, otherwise this is just: "...oh, yeah... my daughter told me that about her friends when I asked her about her day last night at dinner..." I'd like to know the significance of sharing these ideas with the world and where the story is heading, and if "The Couple" has more significance than juast that the story happens to be about "A" couple,
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Stuart Haag 2 years ago

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The couple Ep 1: Party short
Genre: Drama,Comedy
A guy has a christmas party but see his girlfriend cheating on him