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Wolf of Penumbra S1 Ep1 Draft #1

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In a post-apocalyptic world where portals invite the supernatural, a high school girl attempts to live a normal life after becoming a human-wulver hybrid. In other words, the first werewolf.
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Wolf of Penumbra S1 Ep2 Draft #1

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In a post-apocalyptic world where portals invite the supernatural, a high school girl attempts to live a normal life after becoming a human-wulver hybrid. In other words, the first werewolf.
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KimberlyForeman
Kimberly Foreman 1 year ago

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Wolf of Penumbra S1 Ep2 television
Genre: Animation,Drama,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
In a post-apocalyptic world where portals invite the supernatural, a high school girl attempts to live a normal life after becoming a human-wulver hybrid. In other words, the first werewolf.
KimberlyForeman
Kimberly Foreman 1 year ago

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Wolf of Penumbra S1 Ep1 television
Genre: Animation,Drama,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
In a post-apocalyptic world where portals invite the supernatural, a high school girl attempts to live a normal life after becoming a human-wulver hybrid. In other words, the first werewolf.
KimberlyForeman
Kimberly Foreman 1 year ago

uploaded a script.

Wolf of Penumbra S1 Ep1 television
Genre: Animation,Drama,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
In a post-apocalyptic world where portals invite the supernatural, a high school girl attempts to live a normal life after becoming a human-wulver hybrid. In other words, the first werewolf.
KimberlyForeman
Kimberly Foreman 5 years ago

just claimed a review for a script.

Lonely Boys short
Genre: Drama,Mystery/Suspense
A bullied boy finds solace talking to the girl next door, unaware that something sinister is happening over the garden fence.
KimberlyForeman
Kimberly Foreman 5 years ago

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Alternative (Rough Draft) feature
Genre: Action/Adventure,Horror,Comedy
Rating: 60%
-In the beginning, I was thrown for a loop because the intro is duplicated. Is this simply leftovers from a revision you forgot to delete? -Gotta say I love the character interactions between Richard and Josh, lots of swearing can feel forced but here it seems more of a habit for the characters. "JOSH Really?! Huh, looks like my mamma was wrong about me being a mini cock-boy." -I don't really understand what this means. Is his mom calling him stupid? I feel like thats the implication but it's not that clear to me. Pg5 "Richard's grin widens. INT. - BASEMENT, NIGHT Richard sketches..." -Feels a tad weird to just pop in here like this, maybe add a fade-out/fade-in? Pg6 "JOSH What the actual fuck. That's fucking trippy!" -Ok, this is funny. Pg8 "THE WORST MAN (cont'd) Oh, you think you're so fucking strong now, don't you? RICHARD You were gonna lose from the very start. That's how it is for everyone like you. THE WORST MAN You can take your so called strength and shove it up your ass!" -Ok, here the dialogue is a tad corny, especially from Richard. I don't like that hes talking like a superhero all of a sudden, It makes sense if you want to keep it that way but I personally dislike it. I do like how he just calls the police after tho, thats funny. Also is there any reason hes stronger than these murderers? Did the machine influence his natural abilities or was that guy just really weak? If so why did no one else in the movie stop him? Why did the husband die? Was he weaker than The Worst Man? Pg11 "JOSH Shit, dude! You got hit! Also, it felt you were gone for no time and forever at the same time!" -This is out of nowhere and its rather confusing. Perhaps you could show what it was like for Josh on the other side waiting for Richard? Pg12 "RICHARD Yeah, same. By the way, I forgot to mention, there's a projector option that allows you to watch what I do in the movies I enter." -I was wondering about that! Pg12 "INT. - KITCHEN, NIGHT Richard and Josh each lean against a counter top across from each other." -Maybe after "Fair point." Richard could suggest celebrating with a drink so its not such a rough transition? Pg13 'INT. - BASEMENT, NIGHT Richard, wearing a welding mask, is welding a large circular saw blade to one end of a chain while Josh stands aside, drinking and watching Richard in awe.' -Drunk weapon-making? Hell yes! Pg14 "JOSH (V.O.) "The Blind Spotter."" -Is he referring to the name of the killer in this movie? Why is he narrating it instead of saying it? Or is he saying it as he puts in the movie? Pg15 -Aww is that it? I was really getting into it! Stuck for ideas? Maybe one of the killers like from "Chain Shatter" escapes into the real world then Richard and Josh need to stop him? Pg17 -I guess overall you need higher stakes and more conflict. Make me feel like something can go wrong at any moment! Right now the characters feel a little too safe.
KimberlyForeman
Kimberly Foreman 5 years ago

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Alternative (Rough Draft) feature
Genre: Action/Adventure,Horror,Comedy
After getting fed up with evil winning in the end of horror movies, a man decides to take matters into his own hands.
KimberlyForeman
Kimberly Foreman 5 years ago

uploaded a script.

Living In Penumbra Ep3 Little Lights television
Genre: Animation,Comedy,Drama
A mischievous high school student faces a chaotic new reality after a horrific creature known as a wulver leaves her with the ability to become a wulver herself. Now she and her two best friends struggle for survival as maintaining this secret means keeping herself alive.
KimberlyForeman
Kimberly Foreman 5 years ago

uploaded a script.

Living in Penumbra Ep2 SilverEyes television
Genre: Comedy,Drama,Animation
A mischievous high school student faces a chaotic new reality after a horrific creature known as a wulver leaves her with the ability to become a wulver herself. Now she and her two best friends struggle for survival as maintaining this secret means keeping herself alive.
KimberlyForeman
Kimberly Foreman 5 years ago

uploaded a script.

Living in Penumbra Ep1 Between Light And Shadow television
Genre: Animation,Comedy,Drama
A mischievous high school student faces a chaotic new reality after a horrific creature known as a wulver leaves her with the ability to become a wulver herself. Now she and her two best friends struggle for survival as maintaining this secret means keeping herself alive.
KimberlyForeman
Kimberly Foreman 5 years ago

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