Kenny A.

This is the 3rd update. No one previously mentioned SVF's backstory? We should know something about the character we're watching. SVF is not Superman....

99.99% of aspiring screenwriters write original stories. The problems in their scripts stem from not understanding characters in action. The problem w...

I hope you're young and just starting out. My suggestion would be to read some books on screenwriting and start there. You open the script with a ni...

I would love to see this. I am going to mention something that some readers might struggle with. It only took a minute to figure it out. I would imagi...

Action lines and dialogue combine to show a story to the reader/audience. Your actions lines are long and clunky. Your dialogue is 99% unuseable. Thes...