Joshua Gaines

Joshua G.

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Star Trek Legacy [Episode 1] Draft #4

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Space, the final frontier, has it depths explored by the USS Legacy and her crew.
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Star Trek Legacy [Episode 2] Draft #1

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Space, the final frontier, has it depths explored by the USS Legacy and her crew
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Project Zero #1 Draft #1

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The mysterious Project Zero brings a whirlwind of problems to the young Isabel Thompson and Daniel Fields. Can they escape the wake of problems it brings with it?
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ANDROIDS #1 Draft #1

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Jonas Jackson & Meredith Gray set out to change the world with the innovation of Android technology. But for Jonas, twenty years passing before he can ever see his crowning achievement. What will Jonas find when he returns to life?
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Joshua Gaines 2 years ago

uploaded a script.

ANDROIDS #1 television
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Drama,Action/Adventure
Jonas Jackson & Meredith Gray set out to change the world with the innovation of Android technology. But for Jonas, twenty years passing before he can ever see his crowning achievement. What will Jonas find when he returns to life?
JoshuaGaines
Joshua Gaines 3 years ago

just claimed a review for a script.

Chain Link (Work in Progress) feature
Genre: Horror
Teens learn the hard way that if they don't comply and pass on the messages, they pay the price for breaking the link.
JoshuaGaines
Joshua Gaines 3 years ago

just claimed a review for a script.

For the Boys television
Genre: Drama
The series explores the lives of four gay black friends through their friendship, their flourishing careers and their personal lives while living in the Atlanta scene.
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Joshua Gaines 3 years ago

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Family Tradition television
Genre: Comedy
Rating: 33%
First, off, as a script read, it's actually quite fun to do so. My sister and I enjoyed being able to play the characters roles, however the main issue with this is the fact we were unaware of what roles we were actually playing. There was very little detail as to the characterization of the characters. We were left to assume how each character spoke and what was their natural locale. Another glaring issue for us was the fact that we were not exactly following the story-line. It was a cold open, which in itself isn't a bad thing. However, you want you audience to be aware at the very beginning of where the story is and where it will lead too. I was aware that Tammy was fresh from a break-up because of the log line. However you need to express this in the screenplay's story progression. The audience will not follow without the context. However, I will say, that assuming that the characters live in a southern state or least a state with the southern mentality, it was natural for I and my sister to read the dialogue. We both live in a southern state. So I felt that the dialogue was actually natural and comedic in tone, which is what you were going for. Still, the script is riddled with cliches, something that is okay from time to time, as cliches are a callback to something before that most people fondly remember. However, you do not want to overstate a cliche to often. It can take away from the originality of your screenplay, and it can be a crutch. Overall, I have to say, that this screenplay does need work. In fact, I believe that it would be better suited to be written as a book rather than a screenplay. If you ever get a chance to, check out my screenplays Androids #1 & Project Zero #1. You might like what you read or hate it! And that's fine! We're all here to help each other improve, so let's do it!
JoshuaGaines
Joshua Gaines 3 years ago

just claimed a review for a script.

Family Tradition television
Genre: Comedy
Betty’s daughter Tammy moves back in after her boyfriend dumped her, now she’s raising her adult children and grandchild
JoshuaGaines
Joshua Gaines 3 years ago

uploaded a script.

Project Zero #1 television
Genre: Action/Adventure,Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Thriller
The mysterious Project Zero brings a whirlwind of problems to the young Isabel Thompson and Daniel Fields. Can they escape the wake of problems it brings with it?
JoshuaGaines
Joshua Gaines 3 years ago

uploaded a script.

Star Trek Legacy [Episode 2] television
Genre: Action/Adventure,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Space, the final frontier, has it depths explored by the USS Legacy and her crew
JoshuaGaines
Joshua Gaines 3 years ago

uploaded a script.

Star Trek Legacy television
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Space, the final frontier, has it depths explored by the USS Legacy and her crew.
JoshuaGaines
Joshua Gaines 5 years ago

uploaded a script.

ANDROIDS #1 television
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
For the creator of Androids, time can change a lot when you're not around. Can Jonas continue to lead innovation? Can Aurora become the crowning achievement of that innovaction?
JoshuaGaines
Joshua Gaines 5 years ago

just joined ScriptMother!