Isaac Chiswesha
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Two half brothers and soul heirs to the Mpezeni kingdom in central Africa who grew up from different worlds must settle their succession dispute in a boxing ring.
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After falling victim and silenced by a sexual abuser, a young woman must find means to expose this powerful man or the girl children continue to being abused
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After impregnating his own biological daughter, a psychosexual disordered man must find means to conceal his sexual relation or face divorce and conviction.
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Isaac Chiswesha 1 year ago

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BLACK CHILD feature
Genre: Drama
After falling victim and silenced by a sexual abuser, a young woman must find means to expose this powerful man or the girl children continue to being abused

IsaacChiswesha
Isaac Chiswesha 1 year ago

uploaded a script.

INCEST feature
Genre: Drama
After impregnating his own biological daughter, a psychosexual disordered man must find means to conceal his sexual relation or face divorce and conviction.

IsaacChiswesha
Isaac Chiswesha 1 year ago

just purchased a review. Claim it here

BLACK CHILD feature
Genre: Drama
After falling victim and silenced by a sexual abuser, a young woman must find means to expose this powerful man or the girl children continue to being abused

IsaacChiswesha
Isaac Chiswesha 1 year ago

uploaded a script.

BLACK CHILD feature
Genre: Drama
After falling victim and silenced by a sexual abuser, a young woman must find means to expose this powerful man or the girl children continue to being abused

IsaacChiswesha
Isaac Chiswesha 2 years ago

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DEMANDING VOICES feature
Genre: Mystery/Suspense
Rating: 47%
MY OVERALL FEED BACK. WHAT I DID NOT LIKE: a) DESCRIPTION - In the opener. Your told us & did not show us in some portion of your description. For example: You telling us the greystone psychiatric hospital. You tell us about how it used to be a torturing place. I think this should be ommited. Write what we can hear n see in the screenplay. Not what happened. b) CONFLICTS -The conflicts were a bit flat. Yes you set out a double conflict. His fight with his inner demons and the doctor. But I feel the conflict should have been more intense. E.g.. I expected more intense fight between Justin n the voices. For example: they are forcing him to eat the food which he believes it's poisoned. He doesn't obey their command. ( this sounds better). Now his choice not to obey the voice complicates. He is seriously thirsty and hungry. Then it complicate further when he sees a fellow patient that takes drugs on an empty stomach go in syncope. This makes him judge. Take a risk. Both directions he takes can be fatal. He eats he dies or take meds he dies. This intrigues us more and sympathize with our main characters quest to survive. c) STRUCTURE - I didn't like it. I expected the inciting incident and the major turning point but did not see any at the expected time frame. Here is how I could have done. Am not trying to change your story in any way. OPENING IMAGE: - Just like you introduced. HOOK - When Justin witnesses the murder of the patient. @ page 5-10. INCITING INCIDENT - When Justin discovers that there is a list or order on how the murders will be done FIRST MAJOR TURNING POINT - When he finds the paper and discovers that his pregnant girlfriend and him are next. Like that. WHAT I LIKED - The concept and story was okhy. - The opener - Doctor Eric's subtext dialogue and his lie OTHERS - Please get back to me on how you found my review. Contact me: +260975483789 Watsapp or email Chisweshaisaac287@gmail.com Thank you. Continue with great work

IsaacChiswesha
Isaac Chiswesha 2 years ago

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DEMANDING VOICES feature
Genre: Mystery/Suspense
After an insane asylum patient witnesses his revered psychiatrist murdering fellow patients, he battles the voices in his head to convince someone in the sane world he's not hallucinating before more patients are murdered, including himself and his pregnant, patient girlfriend.

IsaacChiswesha
Isaac Chiswesha 2 years ago

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Cowspiracy Ep 2 television
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
The birth of a baby cow produces hope for a struggling farmer but also an unforseen detrimental magic

IsaacChiswesha
Isaac Chiswesha 2 years ago

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Again to Love feature
Genre: Romance,Drama
A college foreign exchange student unintentionally gets involved in a love triangle between two exes and must decide to let her feelings be known, or let them get back together.