Chase D.

The first slug line should have had the master slug line. Every master slug line has INT. or EXT. then PLACE then TIME. You should have started with t...

“Two bodies tumbling and rolling down a hill of tall grass. Both dressed like eighteen-hundred’s cowboys. Once they stop moving KIRK, 29, jumps up fra...

1- No title page, every single screenplay should have a title page, you just have the title on the first page. 2- “intro” you don’t “intro” a screenpl...

Lubu goes from annoyed to Sammy’s presence to fine with it and having conversation with him like an old friend. It just seems a little sudden. also ag...