Bruno Starrs

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Bekantan! ... or ... Attack of the Horny Killer Monkeys. Draft #1

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When a traumatized cop's wife and daughter are attacked by sex-crazed mutant monster monkeys in the Brunei jungle, he must 'man up' and face his phobias - or lose his beloved family.
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Bruno Starrs 1 year ago

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BLACK CHILD feature
Genre: Drama
After falling victim and silenced by a sexual abuser, a young woman must find means to expose this powerful man or the girl children continue to being abused
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Vox Populi feature
Genre: Action/Adventure,Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Thriller
In a cyberpunk post-Brexit Britain, a jaded, cynical cop and a freedom fighter with a vision become embroiled in a clandestine conspiracy involving a pair of warring factions competing for control of the former United Kingdom, and with it, the world.
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HO HO HO feature
Genre: Comedy
When Krampus stirs up a Holiday toxic spill that unleashes a massive crime wave on the Las Vegas strip, an aloof dominatrix, with the help of Santa, opens her heart and uses her controlling skills and some clients to firmly handle the situation and save Christmas.
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Bruno Starrs 2 years ago

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TROOP ETERNITY feature
Genre: Horror,War
When Russia attacks Ukraine in 2022, a patriotic vampire joins the United States military to destroy the Russian Army and stop newly minted vampire Vladimir from annihilating the world with nuclear weapons.
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Bruno Starrs 2 years ago

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The color of love short
Genre: Drama,Family
A colorblind kid with autism wants to win an art competition
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Bruno Starrs 2 years ago

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The color of love short
Genre: Drama,Family
Rating: 0%
There are some fundamental errors in your screenwriting that guarantee no potential producer will take you at all seriously as an author. 1. Never refer to another artist’s copyrighted material in your script. “Sonic the Hedgehog” is protected under copyright and it’s highly unlikely a producer will ever bother trying to get the (typically very expensive) rights - If they’re even available. Note, without reference to “Sonic”, your screenplay now has no structure. Better to invent your own cartoon character than base your entire script on using someone else’s legal property. And the same goes for the “Baby Shark” song – No producer will be interested in a script requiring the payment of yet-to-be negotiated copyright fees to who knows how many artists. 2. Never write camera or editing instructions such as “CUT TO”, "FADE IN", "DISSOLVE TO" or "CLOSE UP" etc. To do so instantly confirms to any professional reader that you’re an amateur. 3. Always save on valuable screenplay 'real estate' by maximising efficient use of white space on the page. Rewrite if a piece of dialogue unnecessarily goes to an extra line by just one word. Avoid one or two word scene descriptions: Ideally, they should be 2-3 lines, cramming as much information into as few lines as possible. At the other extreme, never go over four lines in a scene description. Remember, one page of a screenplay should equal one minute on the screen. In reality, your 21 page screenplay is only an 8-10 minute film, thanks to your extremely inefficient use of space. 4. Please have your script proofread before sending it out. At present. your screenplay is chockablock full of spelling and grammatical errors. To give such unfinished work to a professional would be very insulting to the reader and possibly fatal for your screenwriting career.
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The color of love short
Genre: Drama,Family
A colorblind kid with autism wants to win an art competition
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Bruno Starrs 5 years ago

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Alternative (Rough Draft) feature
Genre: Action/Adventure,Horror,Comedy
After getting fed up with evil winning in the end of horror movies, a man decides to take matters into his own hands.
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Bruno Starrs 5 years ago

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Bop short
Genre: Comedy
A washed-up boxing trainer finds new hope in an unlikely protege: An inflatable bop clown.
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Bruno Starrs 5 years ago

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Bekantan! ... or ... Attack of the Horny Killer Monkeys. feature
Genre: Comedy,Action/Adventure
When a traumatized cop's wife and daughter are attacked by sex-crazed mutant monster monkeys in the Brunei jungle, he must 'man up' and face his phobias - or lose his beloved family.