The formatting makes it unnecessarily challenging to read, but it's seems as though you know formatting, so perhaps this is a software issue. Consider looking into a free software to make things easier for both you and the reader in the future.
The lack of slugline in the introduction makes it difficult to understand where we are. The mention of the many faces-- are we zooming in on a man in a crowd? Who's then lighting a cigarette? The spacial description has me lost. Is this an introduction like a Creature Feature, or are we Flashing Back?
It feels like a stageplay, but with the time hopping it must be for film. It's quite a monologue, and I'm struggling to understand why were going on this tour. The visuals feel more like emphasis. You're flipping the saying "show, don't tell" on it's head, which can be a huge challenge to do right. Your characters either have to be hugely relatable, or absurd, and I don't think it's enough here.
It's not until page 10 that we get a full scene. Format-wise, it's a challenge to break down dialogue vs. monologuing, so I'll say that the dialogue is fun. I like the antiquated speech, as it lends to this alien feeling overall. I think the story could be told more succinctly with much less monologuing/introduction and outro. By page 22, it ocurred to me how bonkers this could be translated to a one-man show, but it's difficult to understand how this story would be told. I hope your next draft is formatted for easier reading, as it was super intimidating, and it's weird to be intimidated by slapstick fear-boners.
