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Temple of the Dog Draft #1

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In 1993, an eighth-grader attends a new school in Long Island and befriends two unlikely grunge-obsessed boys, who bring him into their band as the drummer.
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john schramm 2 years ago

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Temple of the Dog feature
Genre: Drama
In 1993, an eighth-grader attends a new school in Long Island and befriends two unlikely grunge-obsessed boys, who bring him into their band as the drummer.
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john schramm 2 years ago

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Genre: Action/Adventure,Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Romance
In a world where 96% of the population is sentenced to mandatory grueling work, two teen girls whose parents have been stolen by the government find each other, fall in love and journey to liberate the world.
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john schramm 2 years ago

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Temple of the Dog feature
Genre: Drama
In 1993, an eighth-grader attends a new school in Long Island and befriends two unlikely grunge-obsessed boys, who bring him into their band as the drummer.
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john schramm 2 years ago

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The Very Thought of You feature
Genre: Drama,Crime
Rating: 47%
I really think you have a cool idea for a feature length screenplay about a man who has to deliver his wife's ashes across the country, and along the way gets wrapped up in bank robbing, car jacking, bar fights, etc. on his way to catharsis and healing. Watch the great road trip movies and see how they executed their story. I don't mine Heath dying in the end, if he wants to be with his wife, but make it in a way that helps him heal. Look at Grand Torino. Clint Eastwood is a racist, selfish ass and when he sacrifices himself in the end, it's for the love of immigrant he used to loath. it's a part of his catharsis. I would go deep into Heath and find out what he has to learn from this trip? What does he ultimately learn about life from this road trip experience. Again, I would watch A Man Called Ove to see a really touching character arc.
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The Very Thought of You feature
Genre: Drama,Crime
An old man goes to the ends of the earth to fulfil a promise to his dead wife...
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