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Robin A.

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The Sacrifice by Liam Treacy

#Drama #Horror

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A lonesome girl is trying to push herself over the limit to please the adult lifestyle.

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Robin Andersson 4 years ago

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The Sacrifice short

Genre: Drama,Horror

Rating: 27%

A very wellcrafted tale. Graphic and somehow fitting. The age of the young girl and the action she takes seems hopeless, but also real in some ways. I could visualise it in my mind and it was disturbing. The dialogue feels a bit rough in some ways. It feels to adult for a 13 year old and somehow lifeless. That might be the point of the creator, but as a reader it was hard to fully take it seriously. Took some time to truly understand the events taking place, but I was also thinking alot about the piece after reading it. So it did deliver what is was supposed to deliver. An afterthough. The writer does have a promising possibility to write other great works with such detailed information in the script. Even if the dinner-scene didn't feel as correct in it's excecution. Overall a wellmade tale that can get a bit sharper in some spots.

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Robin Andersson 4 years ago

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The Sacrifice short

Genre: Drama,Horror
A young girl must make the ultimate sacrifice in order to appease the one she loves.

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