I will be focusing on format and style here rather than story. The first fifteen system to catch these issues doesn’t seem to work well simply because many of the reviewers are making the same mistakes as the authors. I urge everyone to invest in a hard copy format manual. The internet is no substitute.
I can see you building a rich world here. These kinds of fantasy scripts can be trickier to sell because you’re asking so much more of the rea...
Peter Pan, a boy who won't grow up, takes three Edwardian children with him to a magical island full of pirates, fairies, and mermaids; an island where children are always at play.
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