The concept is interesting. You are quickly drawn into the story which obviously is essential given that the script is a short one. The scenes are well-written overall, with possibly some scope for tightening up the first half page, ideally cut down on the early action description set up regarding the shower scene which is a little dragged out.
The scene where the dad confront the bickering girls is very well written. This scene will be famili...
The avid reading of the Book of Evils makes Tom to experience a nightmare. He is saved from that sleep by the calling of his name by Sarah and his neighbours
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