Black Rose feature
#Horror #Sci-Fi/Fantasy #Mystery/Suspense
By
Carter
Bain
A young woman must run a news broadcast during an apocalyptic event.
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It starts off slow paced, but okay. There's not a lot of attatchment to the lead person.
I noticed a quirk of the news cast. No newscaster would ever say after a word from our sponsors...... Another example of awkward wording. Paraquote "Should I press this fire department button?"
If I'm scared I don't ask should I load this cylindrical shell into this 20gauge? No sense really. I mean from a realistic stand point.
If Frankenstein tracks...
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