Thilos
short
When Art goes, love loses some expression
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10 pages |
4 months ago
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Draft 1
Summary
It’s 2032 and art has been made illegal. Thilos must come to grips with his broken marriage and save his career as the most successful artist of his generation.
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trying to come across as mean, I just want to make
sure this review is useful and gives a lot of tips for
how you can improve your story.
-Take a look at how to properly format a script.
Final Draft is a program that does a lot of
the formatting automatically, but there are
also free options. The formatting is one of the
first things a reader notices, so you want to
make sure you h...
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