a girl with some past childhood trauma, who has always been hiding her emotions and true feelings, finally confronts her mother about the trauma and how her parents' complicated relationship made things difficult.
1) How this got past the first fifteen where formatting is supposed to be checked is beyond me. This isn't a screenplay at all. The first thing you need to do is learn how to format a screenplay.
2) This is filled with misspellings, poor punctuation (worse than mine).
3) You need to start slow and end strong. Build to the reveal of abuse.
4) Watch videos of real victims speaking about their trauma and PTSD. Nothing in this rings true.
A senior in highschool finds herself struggling with the demons in her head ultimately trying to refuse possibly the best offer in her life. Soon enough, she finds that those demons end up helping her. Quite literally.
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