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The Adventures of Ciara Foster

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By Marcin Klinkosz
Action/Adventure,Crime,Mystery/Suspense

As an orphaned daughter of the famous archaeologist tries to solve on her own a mysterious accident in London’s Tube, she accidentally sabotages the international jewel robbery plotted by the criminal mastermind, The Colonel.

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Peer Rating: 87%
Industry Rating: N/A
1 Reviews | 46 pages | 4 months ago | Draft 1

Summary

As an orphaned daughter of the famous archaeologist tries to solve on her own a mysterious accident in London’s Tube, she accidentally sabotages the international jewel robbery plotted by the criminal mastermind, The Colonel.

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Peer Reviews

Excellent work. Peer review sites are filled with non-screenplays. This is a definitive screenplay. It could be taken "as is" and it would make a TV pilot that makes perfect sense. There's a lot of exposition that could come to light in upcoming episodes. All around good work.

My favorite part of this is Ciara addressing the camera. It's not new. But her change in attitude was extremely well done. The dialogue in those instances is excellent....

4 months ago | read more...
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