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#Horror #Mystery/Suspense #Thriller
A young man who survived a horrific childhood abduction hasn't dared leave home in 15 years, so his brother and an ominous doctor devise a plan to scare him out of his house, but when bizarre things start to happen, is it the work of his brother or is he beginning to lose his mind.
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1 Reviews |
95 pages |
4 years ago
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Draft 2
Excerpts from previous reviews of the script:
· “A twist readers won't see coming and an impactful finale that is truly shocking.”
· “An intriguing delve into the psyche of someone suffering from agoraphobia. The writing is descriptive and compelling. …Fantastic twist the reader doesn't see coming.”
· “Watching the protagonist implode was a harrowing experience. …Moves at a lightning pace. …Intensely character-driven, complemented by quality dialogue.”
· “Very well written. The plot is efficient and clear, fleshing out the story and characters thoroughly, while not wasting any time. The twist is genuinely surprising yet well-set-up, resulting in a compelling and darkly satisfying conclusion.”
· “Visual and horrifying imagery, constantly keeping the reader wondering what is real.”
· “The script does a good job of slowly amping up the atmosphere so that by the third act the script is ready to cut loose. It really packs a wallop and pays off everything that has come before it.”
· “A twist readers won't see coming and an impactful finale that is truly shocking.”
· “An intriguing delve into the psyche of someone suffering from agoraphobia. The writing is descriptive and compelling. …Fantastic twist the reader doesn't see coming.”
· “Watching the protagonist implode was a harrowing experience. …Moves at a lightning pace. …Intensely character-driven, complemented by quality dialogue.”
· “Very well written. The plot is efficient and clear, fleshing out the story and characters thoroughly, while not wasting any time. The twist is genuinely surprising yet well-set-up, resulting in a compelling and darkly satisfying conclusion.”
· “Visual and horrifying imagery, constantly keeping the reader wondering what is real.”
· “The script does a good job of slowly amping up the atmosphere so that by the third act the script is ready to cut loose. It really packs a wallop and pays off everything that has come before it.”
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It’s been a long time since I’ve read a thriller this consistently compelling. Your setup is deceptively simple: show us part of a tragic event, flash forward to the apparent victim’s attempt at living a life, give him a fun love interest, a caring family member and concerned doctor and cue the weird stuff. Brilliant! I’m in! Here’s where you set yourself apart: you craft a very believable story of trauma, and through the escalation of events, yo...
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