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John is a time traveler by birth. He learns how to use his powers alongside his brother from their dad. It's a tricky business, learning how to control a curse.

I understand there are problems with my story and I am reworking the structure and order of events as well as stories issues that come about. I still would appreciate feedback on this current draft so as I am rewriting, I can incorporate your thoughts as well. I truly appreciate anyone who takes the time to do this, thank you.