I know this is supposed to be for a mini-outline but I really would like another pair of eyes to look over this to see if I'm on the right track. I'm kind of sick of looking at this draft at the moment.
I liked this quite a bit. It's a lot better than most of the scripts I've read on here. I still stand that this should be much longer and have a bigger story and the flesh the characters out more. But other than that, good job.
The travels of a lone bounty Hunter in the dead winter of Mississippi, far from civilised land, hunts down his old slave overseer in the search for answers.
In this Scripted Reality series, Former FBI Agent, Jim Wilson, is a private detective who takes the crazy but true stories you might expect to see on the X-files!
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