I know this is supposed to be for a mini-outline but I really would like another pair of eyes to look over this to see if I'm on the right track. I'm kind of sick of looking at this draft at the moment.
I liked this quite a bit. It's a lot better than most of the scripts I've read on here. I still stand that this should be much longer and have a bigger story and the flesh the characters out more. But other than that, good job.
This show is a prime-time, hour-long, crime action-adventure drama about a street-smart hacker who loses his niece to an assassination attempt in 2012 and will use all his tools and his phone to take over a new operating system in Chicago to hunt the criminals responsible.
As an orphaned daughter of the famous archaeologist tries to solve on her own a mysterious accident in London’s Tube, she accidentally sabotages the international jewel robbery plotted by the criminal mastermind, The Colonel.
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