I know this is supposed to be for a mini-outline but I really would like another pair of eyes to look over this to see if I'm on the right track. I'm kind of sick of looking at this draft at the moment.
I liked this quite a bit. It's a lot better than most of the scripts I've read on here. I still stand that this should be much longer and have a bigger story and the flesh the characters out more. But other than that, good job.
A man who desperately tries to keep himself away from humanity is forced back to his old town when the news finds him that his brother has passed away. Having to go back and face some demons along the way.
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