Personally, I get turned off by gratuitous cussing. Seems like every character cusses, even the FBI agents. Most FBI agents are professional. Currently, cussing in the government is reported as a sign of sexual harassment. The old days are gone.
Page 3 – The VO repeats what BM says earlier. This an infraction that critics recognize quickly.
Page 4 – should be ‘none other than’
Page 5 – There is no ‘?’ after ANGIE DONATO’s lines. I there a rea...
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