Personally, I get turned off by gratuitous cussing. Seems like every character cusses, even the FBI agents. Most FBI agents are professional. Currently, cussing in the government is reported as a sign of sexual harassment. The old days are gone.
Page 3 – The VO repeats what BM says earlier. This an infraction that critics recognize quickly.
Page 4 – should be ‘none other than’
Page 5 – There is no ‘?’ after ANGIE DONATO’s lines. I there a rea...
In 1958, a small town sharp-shooter becomes the third in a trio of female robbers, led by a violent, unpredictable psychopath, to pursue a foreseeable fortune along their road trip of crime and destruction.
Three stories take place after a crime goes wrong. A waitress must decide what to do with the jewels she found on a crime scene. A group of mobsters struggle to find the person who stole their goods. And a young couple finds themselves hunted by an unexpected enemy.
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