The ending saved this short script. It really brought the point home. I was pleasantly surprised at the end and really liked your concept. Overall good job
When John keeps having the same recurring dream he can't help but feel worthless and helpless. One day everything changes when he spots Carol at a coffee shop and his dream changes to her.
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