A young couple triumphs over an unsupportive family and addiction to make it in the modern world.
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6 years ago
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Draft 1
I'm sorry to terminate the script mid-scene like this, but I realised my reveal of the answer to the central question readers will have after reading this portion of draft isn't up to scratch. I'd like to apologise in advance and promise to TRY uploading the next portion of draft over the weekend.
This is a couple of hours worth of vomit draft I got out over the long weekend. I'm not 100% certain if it's going to be a storyline I pursue, but I feel a review or two may be just the impetus I'm looking for.
Any and all feedback will be taken on board. I'll do my best to include as much of your critiques as possible in future drafts
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