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A TV Episode Screenplay draft about three barhoppers living their daily lives and trying to make it in the world.

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1 Reviews | 32 pages | 1 year ago | Draft 1
A TV Episode Screenplay draft about three barhoppers living their daily lives and trying to make it in the world. Jack tries to get himself a job, meanwhile Bray goes on a first date with a girl.

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Overall the second episode felt weaker than the first, but the story had more potential if that makes sense. I liked what happened in terms of some of the story points, but how it was executed was strange and unusual. The dialogue and characters need some work to be done, and it will eventually get to a good story point where you can achieve what you want. I hope this helps, and good luck :)

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