Sanctuary short
#Drama #Comedy
By
Roy
de Kock
A man is having a lovely day, but when he suddenly realizes he is dreaming right now, he tries to hide away from reality and refuses to wake up.
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3 pages |
1 year ago
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Draft 2
A man is having a lovely day, but when he suddenly realizes he is dreaming right now, he tries to hide away from reality and refuses to wake up.
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Overall it was a good concept that happens to need a little bit of work. There were a few grammar issues and formatting issues. Not enough to drive you crazy, but enough to make it noticeable. I liked the concept but it took a little too long for you to care about the character and when you finally do start rooting for them the story ends. It has great potential and is a pretty good read. If they show us more of the realizations and fix the form...
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