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By Rodrigo Cosme

Two reunited brothers work on their grandfather's old, fantastic experiment that will revolutionise the world.

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Arthur Hills, an old scientist and inventor, is killed way back in the 70s. What his two grandsons didn't know at first was that he was working on something extraordinarily fascinating. They see this as an incredible opportunity to continue his legacy.

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An A.I. inside a teddy bear is activated but abandoned, alone, and starts a a captivating story.

This is a promising script with significant potential. The genre is not unique, but the story is compelling. It harks back to "Small Soldiers", "Batteries Not Included", "9 (2009)", and 80's syfy movies. Twenty-two pages of an nostalgic story. I'd recommend multi-genre storytelling. A family story, horror series, conspiracy thriller, and adventure tale all blended. DOn't forget that a good story requires character development. The brothers, Mrs....

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