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#Drama

By Renee Brown

When two high school teens partying, results in the accidental death of classmate.

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1 Reviews | 9 pages | 6 years ago | Draft 1
#drama #friendship #drugs #Alcohol
Lauren and Niyah attend a wild teen party with drugs and alcohol. They drink and use drugs while at the party. They dance with guys and did a keg stand. When Lauren's mom text asking about her whereabouts, she makes a mad dash to get back home. Unfortunately, her mad dash turned into a homicide after she mows down two people with her car then fled the scene. Their lives change forever.

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A car accident after a party means a change of plans.
The concept of your script isn't very original throughout the whole story. In the beginning, we are at a party with teenagers drinking and smoking. We see this in almost all movies with teenagers. You have basically described a normal scene with a party. I know this is just an intro to the story's timeline, but you could have made it more original. You could have added something else, more special and exotic, to the party. This way, the reader wo...
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