Concept is not good. Plot is good. The characters are real. The dialogue is a thumbs up. The action seems real enough but would have been better if there is conflict.
Climax is good.
When an elevator malfunction traps two strangers, what starts as a minor inconvenience quickly spirals into a heated confrontation, as their contrasting personalities clash under pressure.
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