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While caring for a 10-year-old orphan, an impoverished pessimist tries to keep a homeless shelter he unlawfully occupies from being demolished so the residents won't be evicted.

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Rick, pessimistic, impoverished, and desperate, must discover a way to keep the homeless shelter he runs from being demolished. When a 10-year-old orphan named Sky comes into his care, his perspective on what life can truly be starts to change.

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Good but can be changed for a better reaction from others.

The story so far is pretty interesting and has a good theme and mood around it. I do have the concern of the story going into direction that has alrighty been done. Make it as different as possible. But in time, this story could be a one that all may enjoy.

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As spies infiltrate Southern California months after Pearl Harbor and days after a submarine bombs the shore off of Santa Barbara, a Military Colonel and his family embark on a lifetime of interacting with a spy network roaming in the hills in Central California.

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The story so far is pretty interesting and has a good theme and mood around it. I do have the concern of the story going into direction that has alrighty been done. Make it as different as possible. But in time, this story could be a one that all may enjoy.

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The story so far is pretty interesting and has a good theme and mood around it. I do have the concern of the story going into direction that has alrighty been done. Make it as different as possible. But in time, this story could be a one that all may enjoy.

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Disturbing dystopian satire depicting an American who’s fleeing for his dear life due to war ends up in Canada then to France not knowing there’s a war going on there and finds way to escape with a Flemish Belgian and Irishman by his side.

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As spies infiltrate Southern California months after Pearl Harbor and days after a submarine bombs the shore off of Santa Barbara, a Military Colonel and his family embark on a lifetime of interacting with a spy network roaming in the hills in Central California.

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