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While caring for a 10-year-old orphan, an impoverished pessimist tries to keep a homeless shelter he unlawfully occupies from being demolished so the residents won't be evicted.

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1 Reviews | 105 pages | 2 years ago | Draft 1

#drama #Family #Motivation #Life Lesson #tragedy #Desperation

Rick, pessimistic, impoverished, and desperate, must discover a way to keep the homeless shelter he runs from being demolished. When a 10-year-old orphan named Sky comes into his care, his perspective on what life can truly be starts to change.

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Good but can be changed for a better reaction from others.

The story so far is pretty interesting and has a good theme and mood around it. I do have the concern of the story going into direction that has alrighty been done. Make it as different as possible. But in time, this story could be a one that all may enjoy.

Nether City

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The story so far is pretty interesting and has a good theme and mood around it. I do have the concern of the story going into direction that has alrighty been done. Make it as different as possible. But in time, this story could be a one that all may enjoy.

Nether City

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AGES: 8-80

In 1994, the Daughters of Mary orphanage and the Golden Hill retirement home in New York City each experienced a budget crisis and combined into one facility.

Girl from Fiskhorn

From the back seat of police cruiser, a father sees his daughter taken out of the back of his car by, Ed, a man he knows from her school. The father must decide if she is better off with him or in the "system" like him. Ed must learn that raising a child isn't about finding personal redemption.

Home Sweet Home

A young couple move into the home of their dreams, but their neighbourhood comes with a darkness.

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#Drama

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The story so far is pretty interesting and has a good theme and mood around it. I do have the concern of the story going into direction that has alrighty been done. Make it as different as possible. But in time, this story could be a one that all may enjoy.

Nether City

Recommended for You

AGES: 8-80

In 1994, the Daughters of Mary orphanage and the Golden Hill retirement home in New York City each experienced a budget crisis and combined into one facility.

Girl from Fiskhorn

From the back seat of police cruiser, a father sees his daughter taken out of the back of his car by, Ed, a man he knows from her school. The father must decide if she is better off with him or in the "system" like him. Ed must learn that raising a child isn't about finding personal redemption.

Home Sweet Home

A young couple move into the home of their dreams, but their neighbourhood comes with a darkness.

BlogMother

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