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While caring for a 10-year-old orphan, an impoverished pessimist tries to keep a homeless shelter he unlawfully occupies from being demolished so the residents won't be evicted.

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1 Reviews | 105 pages | 2 years ago | Draft 1

#drama #Family #Motivation #Life Lesson #tragedy #Desperation

Rick, pessimistic, impoverished, and desperate, must discover a way to keep the homeless shelter he runs from being demolished. When a 10-year-old orphan named Sky comes into his care, his perspective on what life can truly be starts to change.

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Good but can be changed for a better reaction from others.

The story so far is pretty interesting and has a good theme and mood around it. I do have the concern of the story going into direction that has alrighty been done. Make it as different as possible. But in time, this story could be a one that all may enjoy.

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The story so far is pretty interesting and has a good theme and mood around it. I do have the concern of the story going into direction that has alrighty been done. Make it as different as possible. But in time, this story could be a one that all may enjoy.

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The story so far is pretty interesting and has a good theme and mood around it. I do have the concern of the story going into direction that has alrighty been done. Make it as different as possible. But in time, this story could be a one that all may enjoy.

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A drug dealer, a prostitute, and an ex-cop team up to retrieve $3,000,000 from a crime boss.

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After being dumped by his girlfriend, a down-on-his-luck alcoholic moves into an unusually affordable NYC apartment only to find out that the previous tenant isn't quite ready to leave – despite dying three years ago.

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