Silent Star feature
#Drama
By
Rafi
Gunawan
While caring for a 10-year-old orphan, an impoverished pessimist tries to keep a homeless shelter he unlawfully occupies from being demolished so the residents won't be evicted.
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105 pages |
2 years ago
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Draft 1
Rick, pessimistic, impoverished, and desperate, must discover a way to keep the homeless shelter he runs from being demolished. When a 10-year-old orphan named Sky comes into his care, his perspective on what life can truly be starts to change.
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The story so far is pretty interesting and has a good theme and mood around it. I do have the concern of the story going into direction that has alrighty been done. Make it as different as possible. But in time, this story could be a one that all may enjoy.
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