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4th Wall short

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#Comedy #Romance

By Quandel Anderson

Morgan often breaks their own 4th wall because that's how they process things, but when Morgan dates this man (Damon) that really likes Morgan. As he becomes closer the connection that Morgan has with the 4th wall becomes complicated.

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2 Reviews | 15 pages | 2 years ago | Draft 1
#comedy #romance #Rom com ##shortfilm ##short #Comedic Moments
A cute rom-com about opening up and patience

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Interesting concept, but the pacing needs work
Overall, a very interesting concept. I would correct a lot of the grammar to make things read more smoothly.
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Fairly quirky with a lot of potential for something bigger
I personally think that there is s lot of potential for this to go further as a full feature, if so chosen to. There is room for comical twists and turns that can be taken advantage of. I hope that you chose to carry this further more. If so, good luck with your script in the future.
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