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Nominee Draft #1
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2 Reviews |
4 pages |
2 years ago
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Draft 1
Joe is stuck in his head about a guy he likes. His phone is his god. When is he going to text? But in the meantime, who better to spill your heart out to than an old toy dog?
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You did an overall job with the structure, character, dialogue, and concept. It came together and made sense and left me as reader wanting more. Your logline drew me in. A simple idea could be written so many different ways and I wanted to see how you were going to pull the story off. I also liked the picture of the stuffed animal for your story. There were some minor problems with the structure but nothing I couldn't overlook. The character was...
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