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1 Reviews |
10 pages |
2 years ago
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Draft 2
Seperated from his family when on a business trip, the pandemic halts all flights. Joel desperately tries to keep his spoilt child entertained by video call which involves him having to go darker than he ever has before.
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In conclusion, despite the fact that the concept isn't strong, the story holds high and has a twisted turn near the end that works oddly well for a dark comedy. With the few revisions/suggestions above, I think this script could be really awesome. Good luck!
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