Dog Person short

The concept of the story is very original. However, this doesn't always make the script, and therefore the story itself, very good. I can tell imagination ran wild for this one. It is noticeable you didn't plan this very well. It is possible to change it: develop the characters, make the story a bit longer. It is probably possible as well, to change the genre completely, maybe even to ANY genre. You can do a lot with this script, which just tells...