“COMIC BOOK HERO: The Scarlet Flame” is a superhero comedy/adventure with a lot of unique aspects that distinguish it from the well-known genre.
Here’s the first two sentences from a paid feedback service, “Overall this is a fun and enjoyable script with a light tone and characters that are instantly likeable. The writer does a good job setting up the protagonists of Jennifer and Paul well from the outset.”
After 5 pages of helpful notes, all relatively minor, the reviewer concludes the review with “As a script, the writer accomplishes what they set out to do. Jennifer and Paul are fun and goofy characters and the plot’s always moving.”
So, I think the script is getting better with each re-write, as it should. I’m hoping that many of you will enjoy the script and might have some good suggestions on how to make it better.
Through the eyes of a young veteran, the movie recalls the dramatic events that lead to the born of the Italian Agrarian Fascism between 1919 and 1922.
A family, along with their son’s best friend, move from Florida to Puerto Rico, and have to adjust to their new lives. Along the way, they make friends, as well as enemies, form relationships, and learn the secret about why their father moved them to the island.
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