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Welcome to College

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1 Reviews | 27 pages | 6 years ago | Draft 1

#comedy #coming of age #Party #College #Beer #sex

A.J does not drink, A.J does not smoke, A,J does not party, yet...

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Stories about college life lies in the characters....

It being a television series of college life that has been done, there is plenty of room for character growth, relationship development, and plot development and storylines. Comedies are sometimes hard to read, leaving the actor to deliver it properly. The characters overall fall flat and each need something that grabs our attention more. That would make a second episode more viable. In my honest opinion, the characters will, and must carry the s...

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