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By Charles Williams

A desperate writer must pitch his idea to a big time producer, before reaching the top floor.

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1 Reviews | 11 pages | 3 years ago | Draft 2

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A low budget short film for short film competitions. A desperate writer must pitch his idea to a big time producer, before reaching the top floor.

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A clever Idea that got me extremally confused.

Great job on the script. I could only say to take a look at the story Vince is pitching and try to story board it. It might help make clear sense for a reader, and don't be afraid to be descriptive.

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Myles Brodsky

A lot more potential to be had.

There is a lot of potential here. A short is under forty pages. I would recommend using that to your advantage to flesh out the story and characters. Possibly even turn it into a feature. But, that is up to you. Good luck on future drafts in your script.

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Michael Kibler

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