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#Horror #Mystery/Suspense #Thriller

Amid a cycle of mysterious family massacres, an 18-year-old running a roadside motel must, within hours of a haunted guest’s suicide, save her family from a vengeful spirit or kill them herself.

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Amid a cycle of mysterious family massacres that has plunged the town into terror, Bella, an 18-year-old girl who manages a remote motel with her family, dreams of escaping her hard and monotonous life. But the sudden arrival of Elisa, a mysterious and disturbed guest, changes everything. Elisa, who arrives at the motel just hours after the massacre of her own family, is found dead the next morning, having taken her life in an unimaginably violent manner.
While the police attribute the incident to Elisa's insanity, Bella sees something in the motel's CCTV footage that she can't explain—a shadowy, invisible presence that was with Elisa the entire time. As time passes, Bella begins to sense more signs of an unknown force in the motel: whispers that swirl in her ears during the silent nights, shadows that appear in the reflection of mirrors, and memories that seem to never have belonged to her.
Now, it’s not just her life at risk—her family is slowly becoming entangled in this nightmare as well. As the hallucinations and strange events intensify, Bella realizes that the same force that led to Elisa's death is now targeting her and her loved ones. With the vengeful presence growing stronger by the minute, Bella is left with two choices: either find a way to save her family, or, like Elisa, end up killing them. But whatever decision she makes, it's not just hers to make—because the whispers inside her mind now feel more real and alive than ever.

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