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By Matthew Boissey

Three burglars posed as a fumigation team slip into the home of a suspected child murderer with a terrible infestation.

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A three-man burglary crew that targets houses under fumigation tents discover their latest mark has a home filled with a suspicious amount of children’s clothes and toys. Determined to catch a predator, the crew tricks the homeowner into coming back, but when they re-enter the house an unknown infestation takes over.

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Incredibly solid stuff with the main story but needs some improvements, especially relating the characters.
I just want to say that’s its not easy to write a one location setting due to the fact it can get boring fairly quickly. You did quite good here making the whole script interesting. So with the story itself I don’t really have issue but as I have mentioned above the characters are honestly quite lifeless. We only learn one thing about the main character and it’s delivered in an exposition dump which just kinda sucks. The key to making this solid...
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