(Not really a drama but there wasn't an "experimental" category.)
The Protagonist meets with his girlfriend in a park, where she breaks up with him. After returning home, he spends his next few weeks going through five intense stages; confusion, humiliation, anger, sadness and acceptance.
**DISCLAIMER** This is supposed to be more of an abstract short, rather than a traditional narrative.
So, my suggestion for that is simply to get better at representing the camera direction. Look up some shooting scripts and use their structure. Try ones with strange dream sequences like Vanilla Sky, or Source Code, or Dr. Strange and the Multiverse o...