Soon to retire newspaper magnate, Charles Carling is anxious to welcome his daughter on her first of work until an attorney shows up, accusing his firm of sexual harassment. Things take a dark turn when he finds out who is behind this ghastly lawsuit.
things I enjoyed, and little notes that I believe might improve the story.
-Your dialogue is good. Character react and respond to eachother believably, and no one seems to drag on or monologue for too long.
-Pg. 6. I like how Charles withdraws his plate of cookies after Marta reveals that she's there...