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My Little Girl

short
By Marion Donnellier
Comedy,Drama

Charles is excited to welcome his darling daughter to his office until an attorney shows up, accusing his firm of sexual harassment.

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Peer Rating: 73%
Industry Rating: N/A
1 Reviews | 24 pages | 4 months ago | Draft 1

Summary

Soon to retire newspaper magnate, Charles Carling is excited to have his darling daughter join his company until an attorney shows up, accusing his firm of sexual harassment. Things take a dark turn when he finds out who is behind this ghastly lawsuit.

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Peer Reviews


A solid story that needs a shot of adrenaline to get it moving.
Provided below is a list of pros and cons. Overall, I think you did a great job with your story, just consider these a few highlights of
things I enjoyed, and little notes that I believe might improve the story.

Pro
-Your dialogue is good. Character react and respond to eachother believably, and no one seems to drag on or monologue for too long.
-Pg. 6. I like how Charles withdraws his plate of cookies after Marta reveals that she's there...

3 months ago | read more...
Jonathan Barbour Top Reviewer

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