When Benji doesn't have an explanation for the things happening to him, he believes the only logical answer is that monsters are causing everything bad in his life
Like I said not for me but definitely would have an audience and would be entertaining, but not great all together. Some details don't make sense like Benji and April being in the same grade at the end despite a 2-3 year age gap. I also think the dream sequences aren't really necessary. It's decently written but outside of the interesting concept it felt like any run-of-the-mill thriller movie that would go direct to Shudder. The third act was th...
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