Overall, this was a decent campy horror comedy script. This felt like one of those turn-your-brain-off kinds of slasher scripts, which is not a bad thing at all because those can be very entertaining. But if you want your script to stand out above other camp slashers, I would recommend working more on fleshing out your story and your main characters before anything else I've listed.

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