Good Day, I hope this finds you well. Normally I do my reviews in a specific order but this one is different so I shall review in the same order as I read your Script. I hope none of my critiques are too harsh and all will help yourself and your script in the future. BLUR: Starting with reversed domestic violence is a very intriguing hook, well done. Pg. 6- 'shocks'- 'shakes'?- 'shocking'? Pg. 8- Jade is an interesting Character I think you can d...
In a world where a unique form of time travel exists for usage by the general public, a depressed man sends himself back 11 years so as to address his past regrets and make a better life for himself.
Get ready, to jump into the exciting life of 15 year old River Lincoln. Starting out at a new high school can be hard enough but when bumping into the school's bully on the the first day, River's life becomes extremely tempestuous. Will he be able to survive at his new school?
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