Good Day, I hope this finds you well. Normally I do my reviews in a specific order but this one is different so I shall review in the same order as I read your Script. I hope none of my critiques are too harsh and all will help yourself and your script in the future. BLUR: Starting with reversed domestic violence is a very intriguing hook, well done. Pg. 6- 'shocks'- 'shakes'?- 'shocking'? Pg. 8- Jade is an interesting Character I think you can d...
After the racially-charged death of their best friend is dismissed by local authorities, two teens begin a descent into their town’s dark history—unraveling a hidden cult-like network, disturbing rituals, and a Corruption so deep it fractures their sense of reality.
In a world where a unique form of time travel exists for usage by the general public, a depressed man sends himself back 11 years so as to address his past regrets and make a better life for himself.
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