Good Day, I hope this finds you well. Normally I do my reviews in a specific order but this one is different so I shall review in the same order as I read your Script. I hope none of my critiques are too harsh and all will help yourself and your script in the future. BLUR: Starting with reversed domestic violence is a very intriguing hook, well done. Pg. 6- 'shocks'- 'shakes'?- 'shocking'? Pg. 8- Jade is an interesting Character I think you can d...
When cynical Laura and short-fused Cam find themselves broke and unemployed in Los Angeles, they stumble through hookups, hangovers, and self-sabotage in a desperate attempt to prove they’re not the problem—though they probably are.
A man who desperately tries to keep himself away from humanity is forced back to his old town when the news finds him that his brother has passed away. Having to go back and face some demons along the way.
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