Good Day, I hope this finds you well. Normally I do my reviews in a specific order but this one is different so I shall review in the same order as I read your Script. I hope none of my critiques are too harsh and all will help yourself and your script in the future. BLUR: Starting with reversed domestic violence is a very intriguing hook, well done. Pg. 6- 'shocks'- 'shakes'?- 'shocking'? Pg. 8- Jade is an interesting Character I think you can d...
When cynical Laura and short-fused Cam find themselves broke and unemployed in Los Angeles, they stumble through hookups, hangovers, and self-sabotage in a desperate attempt to prove they’re not the problem—though they probably are.
A murdered white supremacist enters the Terminal, where he undergoes an evaluation of his life lessons. But the evaluation does not go as expected and leads to stunning consequences.
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