Prisons tough. Especially when your cellmates are an adolescent Cthulhu and a hyper-violent vampire who maybe but probably not but defiantly is the anti-christ. That’s the funky sandwich our main character, Lucas finds himself in. A permanent resident of God’s Abyss, a highly classified prison for the mythical, extraterrestrial, and downright fucking bizarre.
The story was not a bad story, I enjoyed the read, I am personally a family man so I may not watch this.
You are on the right track, you've finished a pilot. It takes gut to do that and to post it online, you really want this. So don't stop if this type of thing is what peaks you're interest go for it there seems to be a nice audience for this.
I mean its fun, could have a crowd. Maybe try to make this into a book first, lots of erotica fan...
Juan Valdez, the owner of Boxes Y Mas, prepares for his US Citizenship test with the help of his well-intentioned but ill-informed employees, homeless vagrants, and wacky customers in the half-hour off-color comedy that will leave you laughing, and probably in need of counseling.
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