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15 pages |
2 years ago
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Draft 1
A luxurious self-sustaining 20 km² underground city called Submergia seems to be the only place on the planet where people survived a global nuclear war. Even the artificial light is indistinguishable from real sunlight. What to do there when you're raised only to be a consumer from replicator products who never needs to work while there's no going outside Submergia?
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Writer created an interesting world but preachy blocks of dialogue need to be replaced with visuals that don't spoon feed the audience a point of view.
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