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A student at a Tier 1 university discovers that he can monetize his intelligence by running an underground tutoring service.
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26 pages |
1 year ago
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Draft 11
Elliott wakes up the morning after his first frat party with no memory of what happened, but eventually discovers he was helping students with their homework while blackout drunk. He and his best friend Tim decide to set up a tutoring service at their university.
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You have a great concept which means you have a strong foundation. You should reshape your story to make the relationship between Ana and Elliot a B-plot, with the tutoring service being the A-plot and the driving force of the humor.
I wish you the best of luck on future drafts.
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