Elliott wakes up the morning after his first frat party with no memory of what happened, but eventually discovers he was helping students with their homework while blackout drunk. He and his best friend Tim decide to set up a tutoring service at their university.
You have a great concept which means you have a strong foundation. You should reshape your story to make the relationship between Ana and Elliot a B-plot, with the tutoring service being the A-plot and the driving force of the humor.
I wish you the best of luck on future drafts.
An unlikely ragtag team of witches find themselves brought closer together as they gain custody of the child of one of the kingdom's most powerful and fearsome leaders.
After finding a folder about "random ass children" in their father's study, two sisters go on a journey around the world to find the family they never knew while uncovering the mystery behind their parent's disappearance.
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